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ROTAG: part 15

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Hey guys and ROTAG is back!!

So, the Robot who was chasing Pat, was my Robotic clone, Pat-Bot. Pat-Bot shoots a Lazer at Pat's box but it changes into Flash one of Pat's Characters, then Pat-Bot scans the endless amount of energy rising from the item over Flash's neck, A Crystal Pencil.

Over 9000, (c) DragonBall Z
Flash (c) :iconpatrick01:
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I think I'm done with people speaking for me. I really, really don't like when people put words in my mouth. It's annoying when my family does it and it's annoying when my friends do it.

Pat, the character, even if it were made and forgotten about does bear resemblance to Yoshu Jr.,and if Pat-Bot were made just to have a robot counterpart on doodle or in comics or anything based on Yoshu Jr. or not is irrelevant. I don't care. Imitation is</i. the greatest form of flattery. That being said if you want my honest opinion on the character or the billion or so character introductions so far, he and it are kinda dumb. If you'd like some constructive criticism, try developing characters and relationships before moving onto the next important guy that jumps in. Try to illustrate more with the comic itself what's happening than in the artist's comments on DA. One-panel transformations make it hard to distinguish what's happening without a paragraph to explain.

You're doing a good job so far. Just, try not to get immature and defensive when somebody gets immature and offensive. There's nothing wrong with silent denial of allegations.

And finally, I usually don't ever get upset about "copy rights" of characters or designs I've come up with. Especially ones developed in a community where everyone has equal say as an artist at the same time. I created Yoshu Jr. Not me and eraser, just me. So to clear up any "copyright laws" you'd have offended only me. Eraserdroid was created afterward, and if I recall correctly, the day of Eraserdroid's creation everybody created a robot counterpart because there was a large-scale robt-human war. It was all supposed to be fun. Not legal matters, and empty alligations.

Sorry for leaving such a large post. I get mad when I hear my voice without manipulating my vocal chords. Keep up the good work.